Essay Rules | Intentional Fragments
Avoid Intentional Fragments in Essays
“Wow! Look at all those FRAG comments Ms. Johnson wrote on your essay. You sure do love your fragments! Maybe consider writing a complete sentence once in a while,” suggested John.
“Ah… life’s too short to have to write all those words,” complained Lara. “I could type an entire essay in emojis.”
Definition and Examples
An intentional fragment is simply an incomplete sentence. It is intentional because the author chooses to use a fragment instead of a complete sentence. Writers use intentional fragments as substitutes for any of the four types of sentences: declarative (statement), imperative (command), or exclamatory (surprise or strong emotion) in narratives (story), poetry, texting, notes, and other forms of informal writing to reflect the authentic language used in everyday speech.
Examples: How dumb. Time to run. That’s amazing! Really?
Read the rule.
Write in complete sentences for all formal writing, including essays and reports, and do not use intentional fragments. A complete sentence expresses a complete thought and includes both a subject and predicate. The voice drops down at the end of a declarative (statement), imperative (command), and exclamatory (surprise or strong emotion) sentence and rises at the end of an interrogative (question) sentence.
Practice
Write the following sentences and [bracket] the intentional fragments.
- How very strange. They would have expected him to put up less of a fight. Go figure!
- Seriously? The author questions whether freedom of assembly should be a right. What a joke!
- Ah, to be young and foolish once again. Who knows if they will return home.
- Visiting the National Parks is amazing. Such beauty and wildlife! All in our protected parks.
- She left her phone at the beach. So sad. No doubt the tide has come in by now. What a loss!
Revise the intentional fragment.
Avoid intentional fragments. Right?
Answers
- [How very strange.] They would have expected him to put up less of a fight. [Go figure!]
- [Seriously?] The author questions whether freedom of assembly should be a right. [What a joke!]
- [Ah, to be young and foolish once again.] Who knows if they will return home.
- Visiting the National Parks is amazing. [Such beauty and wildlife!] [All in our protected parks.]
- She left her phone at the beach. [So sad.] No doubt the tide has come in by now. [What a loss!]
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