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Avoid Intentional Fragments in Essays

“Wow! Look at all those FRAG comments Ms. Johnson wrote on your essay. You sure do love your fragments! Maybe consider writing a complete sentence once in a while,” suggested John.

“Ah… life’s too short to have to write all those words,” complained Lara. “I could type an entire essay in emojis.”

Definition and Examples

An intentional fragment is simply an incomplete sentence. It is intentional because the author chooses to use a fragment instead of a complete sentence. Writers use intentional fragments as substitutes for any of the four types of sentences: declarative (statement), imperative (command), or exclamatory (surprise or strong emotion) in narratives (story), poetry, texting, notes, and other forms of informal writing to reflect the authentic language used in everyday speech.

Examples: How dumb. Time to run. That’s amazing! Really?

Read the rule.

Write in complete sentences for all formal writing, including essays and reports, and do not use intentional fragments. A complete sentence expresses a complete thought and includes both a subject and predicate. The voice drops down at the end of a declarative (statement), imperative (command), and exclamatory (surprise or strong emotion) sentence and rises at the end of an interrogative (question) sentence.

Practice

Write the following sentences and [bracket] the intentional fragments.

1. How very strange. They would have expected him to put up less of a fight. Go figure!
2. Seriously? The author questions whether freedom of assembly should be a right. What a joke!
3. Ah, to be young and foolish once again. Who knows if they will return home.
4. Visiting the National Parks is amazing. Such beauty and wildlife! All in our protected parks.
5. She left her phone at the beach. So sad. No doubt the tide has come in by now. What a loss!

Revise the intentional fragment.

Avoid intentional fragments. Right?

Answers

1. [How very strange.] They would have expected him to put up less of a fight. [Go figure!]
2. [Seriously?] The author questions whether freedom of assembly should be a right. [What a joke!]
3. [Ah, to be young and foolish once again.] Who knows if they will return home.
4. Visiting the National Parks is amazing. [Such beauty and wildlife!] [All in our protected parks.]
5. She left her phone at the beach. [So sad.] No doubt the tide has come in by now. [What a loss!]

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Indirect Questions and Intentional Fragments

Indirect Questions and Intentional Fragments

Play the quick video lesson HERE and click the upper left back arrow to return to this lesson.                                            

Common Core Language Standard 2

The prefix “in” can mean both in or into and not. In the case of the word indirect, the prefix means not. Let’s look at this sentence: “Mark chose an indirect path to the restroom.” This would mean that Mark did not go directly to the restroom, but wandered around a bit.” So indirect means not direct.

Today’s mechanics lesson is on using periods to end indirect questions and intentional fragments. Remember that periods are used to end declarative statements and imperative commands.  Both statements and commands are usually expressed as complete thoughts.

Now let’s read the mechanics lesson and study the examples. 

Indirect questions do not end with a question mark but with a period. Like direct questions they ask for a response, but they are written as declarative or imperative sentences with ending periods. Example: Everyone asks if you are new.

Intentional fragments also end with periods. An intentional fragment is part of a sentence that is treated as a complete thought for literary effect. Example: How crazy.

Now circle or highlight what is right and revise what is wrong according to mechanics lesson.

Practice: How surprising. Everyone wants to know how I am?

Let’s check the Practice Answers.

Mechanics Practice Answers: How surprising. Everyone wants to know how I am.

Now let’s apply what we have learned. 

Writing Application: Write two of your own sentences using an indirect question and an intentional fragment.

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