Don’t Generalize: Get Specific
Avoid Generalizations
“Where do you want to go to lunch? Carlos asked.
“Wherever there’s food to eat and something to drink,” said Ella.
“Could you be a bit more specific? I’d like to narrow my search terms.”
“How about ‘Italian restaurants with deep-dish pizza and red and white checkered tablecloths’?”
“That might be a little too specific, but it sounds good to me.”
Definition and Examples
The hierarchy of an essay refers to the organizational structure and the relationship of ideas within that structure. The most common essay hierarchy is the general to specific organizational pattern. Ideas, groups, and patterns are general. Facts, examples, quotations, details, and statistics are specific. Examples of the General to Specific Organizational Pattern: Substance abuse has become the leading cause of preventable deaths. Last year, opioid deaths surpassed automobile deaths. More than 80,000 Americans died due to opioid overdoses.
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Essays usually begin with general statements and funnel down into a specific thesis statement. A narrow focus is much easier to argue, inform, or explain than a general one. Topic sentences should provide specific reasons to support the thesis statement in an argumentative essay or include specific information or explanation about the thesis statement in an informational/explanatory essay. Supporting evidence, analysis, and minor details must be even more specific. Your teacher may comment “too general” or “be specific” in your body paragraphs. The essay conclusion may return to more general applications of the proven thesis.
Practice
Write the following sentences and [bracket] the writer and essay references.
- Some people need to understand the issues in this world.
- Poisons in our waterways threaten our way of life.
- Many solutions create more problems than they solve.
- Overall, the citizens were basically happy.
- All challenges can be overcome with everyone’s support.
Revise the “too general” sentence to eliminate the writer or essay references.
Generally be sport of specific in your writing.
Answers
- [Some people] need to understand the [issues] in this [world].
- [Poisons] in our [waterways] threaten our [way of life].
- Many [solutions] create more [problems] than they solve.
- [Overall], the [citizens] were [basically] happy.
- [All challenges] can be overcome with [everyone’s support].
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