Avoid Attention-Getting Alliteration
Avoid Alliteration
“I want my fans to pay attention to my magnificent mastery and manipulation of the English language in this argumentative essay,” explained Teddy.
“I’d rather focus their attention on my evidence,” said Cherish. “Save the attention-getting alliteration for your poetry.”
Definition and Examples
Alliteration is a poetic device in which the initial (first) consonant sound is repeated. Example: Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers.
Read the rule.
Don’t use poetic devices, such as alliteration, in formal writing. Poetic devices focus the reader’s attention on the writing itself, while essays are designed to argue a point of view or inform and explain. Essays focus on the content of the writing.
Practice
Write the following sentences and [bracket] the alliteration.
- The bear buried its nose in the berry patch.
- My cat cowered under the couch, afraid of the vacuum monster.
- Sam simply asked if the salmon seemed a bit under-cooked.
- The four hyenas paced nervously in their constricting cages.
- Amaria never noticed that the champion chihuahua was dressed in a fur-lined sweater and diamond dog collar.
Revise the sentence to eliminate alliteration.
Always avoid attention-getting alliteration.
Answers
- The [bear buried] its nose in the [berry] patch.
- My [cat cowered] under the [couch], afraid of the vacuum monster.
- [Sam simply] asked if the [salmon seemed] a bit under-cooked.
- The four hyenas paced nervously in their [constricting cages].
- Amaria [never noticed] that the [champion chihuahua] was dressed in a fur-lined sweater and [diamond dog] collar.
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