Wordiness | Eliminating Expletives
Eliminate Expletives
Manny said, “My teacher told me to stop saying ‘I think’ in my essays.”
“Anything you say or write is what you think or what you believe, isn’t it?” I asked.
“I believe that. At least I think so. In my opinion, you are correct.”
“Yikes! Listen to your teacher,” I advised.
Definition and Examples
An expletive is an unnecessary expression, which does not add meaning to a sentence. Yes, it can be a profanity, but it can also be a word like the “Yes” in this sentence. Often, expletives add emotion or emphasis to one’s speech or writing; however, well-chosen nouns and verbs can usually do the same job and do so with greater precision and brevity.
When speaking, we have quite a few expressions meant to fill space in conversations. Speakers may add, “um,” or “well,” or “you know,” or “uh” when talking to friends. However, in formal speeches, speakers try to eliminate these unnecessary expressions. While these speech fillers are generally not used in writing (except dialogue), writing does have its share of words and phrases inserted into sentences which do not contribute to the meaning.
Position Examples: I believe, I think, in my opinion
Grammatical Examples: There (here) are (were, is, will be)
Read the rules.
There, Their, They’re
Avoid unnecessary expressions in formal writing, such as essays, which do not contribute meaning.
- Do not refer to yourself as the writer in an essay with expressions which state your position or beliefs
- Avoid using words or phrases at the beginning of sentences, which do not contribute meaning.
Practice
Write the following sentences and [bracket] the unnecessary expressions.
- I believe all citizens should vote. There are no excuses not to vote in a democracy.
- Here is an important item for the class to discuss. I think students might have strong opinions on this matter.
- In my opinion and in the opinion of my friends, we should have a pizza party next week.
- There were four contestants in the science fair, which had innovative projects, I think.
- Here will be the sign-up list on the table. I believe everyone should volunteer to do something.
Revise the sentence by eliminating unnecessary expressions.
In my opinion, using “I think” or “I believe” is unnecessary.
Answers
- [I believe] all citizens should vote. [There are] no excuses not to vote in a democracy.
- [Here is] an important item for the class to discuss. [I think] students might have strong opinions on this matter.
- [In my opinion] and [in the opinion] of my friends, we should have a pizza party next week.
- [There were] four contestants in the science fair, which had innovative projects, [I think.]
- [Here will be] the sign-up list on the table. [I believe] everyone should volunteer to do something.
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